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Allegory of Agriculture by ~SaporousSerenade:iconSaporousSerenade:



For the woman whose very initials are in her work.


I Prologue

That we are not beloved partners now
Should, on empathy, make debt nor endow.
I will not, as the others have, compare
your faces with abandonment or stares
of winter nor, as some did, would I brave
new words to enterprise the lasting grave--
Not when the spoils are, themselves, compost;
Turned soils and ever-falling as wheat-ghosts.


II Allegory

When first your dear departed, wearing' rake
Across the back, I thought his moment spake
Something employing spring or ending week
Until I saw a second plow where first peaked--
And Man, to tend another's touch, would know
His work is less and labours will less grow.
Dig there, at night, when Love is fast asleep,
Search with some light, the efforts of his keep.
Beneath is buried for your firmament;
Not growing, only tilling temperament.
Would you alone toil? cover scents of sweet,
Assume a smell of topsoil and of peat
For violets which seduced a yard like weeds?
Uprooted and split: feeding apple seeds.
And show a neighbor how to turn what clings,
You can remind me, on a day in spring,
I do not have the energy for orchard;
That you eat pomegranate, seed and core.
Still to me send Jacks, Dans, your Ferdinand
To learn the draught, why branches gauntly stand,
Trunks wanton but green shaken from their sleeves--
Why use of scythe and cradle at fall leaves.
And you, Induct the reason-deep, deduct all else
Your weeds and foison--anything which sells.
A bower empty: you see worth in men;
But barns sans plenty, may you comprehend
The structure and the weight of what you trade.
They are Words, each of them, by Shaper made
I have been there, a time, at garden's bottom
And seen what you'll reach, by next autumn
The hardest, buried woe for a nightly grove.
Or make your land by a morning bed and know
Full garners, fullness in your husbandry
Hence happy. Anywhere, away from me.
©2008-2009 ~SaporousSerenade
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Author's Comments

Trying a few things out in the old and usually less favoured rhyme scheme. The poem has become dear to me, now, but I think I'm going to like this one when it's ready.

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. . . wow. This is amazing! I don't know why it caught my attention, but it definitely has greatness in it.
It kind of makes me want to go read some of the old things, even though they're nothing like my style.

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"The Christian faith is faith in Christ. It's value or worth is not in the one believing, but in the One believed, not in the one trusting, but the One trusted."
-Josh McDowell
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A warm thankee, madam. I am strongly influenced by the classics, so I strongly accept such a compliment.

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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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Well then you are strongly welcome.

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"The Christian faith is faith in Christ. It's value or worth is not in the one believing, but in the One believed, not in the one trusting, but the One trusted."
-Josh McDowell
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I really, really like this one. I get really cool imagery in my head when I read it.
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Sorry for the late reply, I got kind of... self-conscious about this poem :O
But grazie Lindsay. You support me more than most and I never feel like I quite return the favour <3

That was a little gay, but I only know hallmark and sitcom vocabularies for saying something like that. I guess I could always not say it, but - woops! send button.

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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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Lolz, Hallmark/sitcom vocabulary. Here's a way you could return the favor: leave your hermit crab shell every now and then and visit me and Jimmy! You know we really do enjoy your company when you're not complaining how tired you are. :P
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Well gee thanks for not leaving me as the one awkward guy doing an 'ass-out hug' by the podium at the ceremony.

And eff that! David is a tool and lied about when he'd take me home, they were meant to only be private hints to him. But we should do something today. If David isn't planning on coming over, we should go to Barnes and Noble for some cafe and book discussion.

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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.

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