Instructions: because deviantART hates writers, you'll have to click the download button to view the file as a pdf. From there I highly recommend you copy all the text (ctrl+a) and copy the text into word. But I'm generally not too partial to this pdf format, and I've become quite fond of the "full screen reading" option at the bottom right of Word 2007
Anyway, on to the important stuff! I really, really, really would love any and all critiques. This has been a project of mine for the past three years and, with the help of my enduring friends, it has come this far. Alas, I'm too a point that I can no longer, with respect for those beloved friends, bug them to read another draft.
I ask only that you speak your mind. But if you are stuck on something to say, my hope of this preview is as follows: There are four chapters of twenty-one total posted. The chapters are larger than some may be accustomed, though you'll notice a system of two line breaks for scene changes or one for time displacement. Imagine reading through these chapters in a bookstore or a library: are you sold? would you consider what you just read worthy of further attention or did you lose interest? If so, where?
If you don't like being public with a comment, notes are more than welcome.
Harrow is very dreamy. <3 I love his personality. Tis very hot. Wonderful write, I love the style of it. Excellant job. I didn't loose attention at all, I just only hope that when you publish this I get a signed copy mailed to me. ;D
Haha, I must confess that's the first time I've heard the word 'dreamy' used from anyone's character analysis of Harrow. Most admiration, from the women particularly, so far, has been for Scarlet. I'm glad you approve of him, and especially glad that you approve of my style And duh, Kara! I promise <3
-- As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
Hahaha, oh Kara... You have an opinion that should always be sought
-- As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
Got some unscannable artwork? Own a camera but no scanner? Here's a guide of things to consider in order to effectively take quality photographs of your work. [A tutorial by `fox-orian]
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article.
In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
El tema de lo que separa el arte y el diseño es complicado y se ha debatido durante mucho tiempo. Algunos diseñadores se consideran artistas, pero pocos artistas se consideran diseñadores.
Entonces, ¿Cuál es exactamente la diferencia entre arte y diseño?
The Deviousness Award is an accolade which is traditionally handed out on the 1st of every month to one trully outstanding deviant. `Cyantre is one of the most helpful deviants within our community. With a positive attitude and a resourceful mind, you can always find him providing support and encouragement to those in need. Always looking for ways in which he can get more involved in our community, John's positive presence is to be aspired to. A well respected poet, John is a must-have on your deviantWATCH to make sure that you don't miss out on your dose of community inspiration. It's with great pleasure that the Deviousness Award for November 2009 goes to... Read More
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Coffee = orgasm for the mouth.
And duh, Kara! I promise <3
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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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Coffee = orgasm for the mouth.
You have an opinion that should always be sought
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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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