A journal, music, window-pane; she writes
Or scribbles only after the echoes:
A careful lyric, dew marks framed outside;
Then signs Discontent as her pen's let go.
She sighs--are your daily echoes expired?
My lovely literate, is it routine
To think wisdom already twice transpired
When you are sat down and put to a mean?
She sighs, and I ask why air is not spread
Like our desert beside has long awaited
A rain without its shadow--to be spread
Entirely, in the lips of one unbated.
Put your pen down, sigh onto me
And find your sighing is not empty.
These, beauty, are the thoughts I have
Upon thoughts you have.
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Ahh, I have missed this feeling of unconditional love. I think I will be very sad in a few days when I ruin it all by giving this to her
 Oh well. Blah-blah iambic pentameter, blah blah rhyme scheme sonnet. I had to omit two lines which I placed before the gg of this poem. I have a strange attachment to them for some reason. I think it's because they make the poem a bit less formal, which is right in something intimate and inexperienced. Edit: I added the two lines as I plan on giving it, plus a small inscription beneath that. Also changed this version to match my edited piece. |
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Coffee = orgasm for the mouth.
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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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Coffee = orgasm for the mouth.
...and how she probably wouldn't care, because she's pretty much disappeared ever since I gave this to her, haha.
You're right, it's sad
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As a matter of personal respect I have never quoted anyone I did not think was more clever than myself which has, until today, made me seem very foolish.
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Coffee = orgasm for the mouth.
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